http://larlyssa.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] larlyssa.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] poppy_sky 2011-11-23 07:16 pm (UTC)

Surprised at Yoochun's tricks! I loved the idea of a machine dragon, that would be amazing :D The time period seems to be Middle Ages/Crusades-ish so that kind of technology at the time would certainly be....wow ^^

Really well written. I'm happy Jae helped Yunho, but Yunho needs to be nicer *pout* Good job, and off to read the next chapter z
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