Haunted [Chapter 1]
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poppy_skyRating: PG13
Warnings: Horror themes.
Summary: The Dong Bang apartment has become too crowded. When more living space is needed, the boys will ask the company for new living quarters. When they arrive at the destination they are met with their dream house, however, will that dream turn into a nightmare once obscure things start happening in that house?
A/N: Okay guys, I'm doing this. There's no turning back. I had this chapter written already but I has hesitant to post because I'm terrible at updating. I figured I'll make the chapters short-ish, therefore easier to update. Sorry if this is total fail, it's my first attempt at a horror fic and a chaptered DBSK fic. Enjoy!
A blood-curling shriek was heard in the middle of the night. Jaejoong, who had stayed up that night jumped at the sound; the pen he was writing a new song with fell of his hand and hit the wooden desk, rolling towards the floor and under Yoochun’s bed. Said man also woke up startled.
“What’s going on?” Yoochun croaked out, getting out from under the covers, still more asleep than awake. He rubbed his eyes sleepily and ran a hair through his messy hair, trying to shake the drowsiness out of his system.
“Don’t know,” Jaejoong responded, his chair making a screeching sound as it was pushed back; the soft slapping of Jaejoong’s feet on the floor barely heard.
He was out of the room in a couple of long strides leaving the door open. Yoochun rubbed the sleep from his eyes and followed the older man.
The apartment was submerged in darkness and they could barely make out the furniture’s outline, like the shadows of malicious creatures ready to pounce on them. Moving carefully and slowly they made their way to a groaning mass writhing in the hallway connecting the apartment’s main rooms. Yoochun looked over Jaejoong’s shoulder and gulped. Maybe they should’ve brought some kind of weapon along, he thought, looking around but it was useless. He wouldn’t find anything useful in this darkness. Meanwhile Jaejoong was fumbling around the wall searching for the light switch, his eyebrows scrunching in frustration until he found it. He was too slow though.
Light flooded the hallway; someone had switched it on from the other side. Looking over his hyung’s shoulder again, Yoochun saw Yunho and Junsu, both dressed in their pajamas and wearing similar tired expressions, standing on the opposite side of the hallway. Between them there was no other than Changmin, and Yoochun’s collapsed keyboard. They stared at one another puzzled.
“What happened?” Yoochun inquired, breaking the silence.
“Yah! Why don’t you put this thing in the music room?” Changmin retailed, rubbing his sore ankle. He kicked the collapsed instrument with his other leg.
“Yah! Be careful! There’s no more space. Actually, there is no space left anywhere so I put it there.”
“What were you doing up at this hour anyway Changmin?” the leader asked the youngest, who smiled sheepishly.
“Mid-night snack.”
After the initial fright, it was time to clean up the mess. The keyboard had knocked some other stuff into the way and had to be arranged against the wall again. Being the motherly one out of the group, Jaejoong send his dongsaengs to sleep while he and Yunho cleared up the rubble.
“I agree with Yoochun though.”
“On what?” Yunho asked, setting a CD tower back in its place.
“This place is getting really cramped; maybe we need a new apartment, a house even.”
“I’ll talk to manager-hyung in the morning.”
Jaejoong hummed softly in response as he swept the disturbed dust from the hallway’s floor.
That's the first chapter, sorry for the lack of excitement -___-. Do you want me to include any pairings? They will not be the main focus though. Tell me what you think!
Warnings: Horror themes.
Summary: The Dong Bang apartment has become too crowded. When more living space is needed, the boys will ask the company for new living quarters. When they arrive at the destination they are met with their dream house, however, will that dream turn into a nightmare once obscure things start happening in that house?
A/N: Okay guys, I'm doing this. There's no turning back. I had this chapter written already but I has hesitant to post because I'm terrible at updating. I figured I'll make the chapters short-ish, therefore easier to update. Sorry if this is total fail, it's my first attempt at a horror fic and a chaptered DBSK fic. Enjoy!
A blood-curling shriek was heard in the middle of the night. Jaejoong, who had stayed up that night jumped at the sound; the pen he was writing a new song with fell of his hand and hit the wooden desk, rolling towards the floor and under Yoochun’s bed. Said man also woke up startled.
“What’s going on?” Yoochun croaked out, getting out from under the covers, still more asleep than awake. He rubbed his eyes sleepily and ran a hair through his messy hair, trying to shake the drowsiness out of his system.
“Don’t know,” Jaejoong responded, his chair making a screeching sound as it was pushed back; the soft slapping of Jaejoong’s feet on the floor barely heard.
He was out of the room in a couple of long strides leaving the door open. Yoochun rubbed the sleep from his eyes and followed the older man.
The apartment was submerged in darkness and they could barely make out the furniture’s outline, like the shadows of malicious creatures ready to pounce on them. Moving carefully and slowly they made their way to a groaning mass writhing in the hallway connecting the apartment’s main rooms. Yoochun looked over Jaejoong’s shoulder and gulped. Maybe they should’ve brought some kind of weapon along, he thought, looking around but it was useless. He wouldn’t find anything useful in this darkness. Meanwhile Jaejoong was fumbling around the wall searching for the light switch, his eyebrows scrunching in frustration until he found it. He was too slow though.
Light flooded the hallway; someone had switched it on from the other side. Looking over his hyung’s shoulder again, Yoochun saw Yunho and Junsu, both dressed in their pajamas and wearing similar tired expressions, standing on the opposite side of the hallway. Between them there was no other than Changmin, and Yoochun’s collapsed keyboard. They stared at one another puzzled.
“What happened?” Yoochun inquired, breaking the silence.
“Yah! Why don’t you put this thing in the music room?” Changmin retailed, rubbing his sore ankle. He kicked the collapsed instrument with his other leg.
“Yah! Be careful! There’s no more space. Actually, there is no space left anywhere so I put it there.”
“What were you doing up at this hour anyway Changmin?” the leader asked the youngest, who smiled sheepishly.
“Mid-night snack.”
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After the initial fright, it was time to clean up the mess. The keyboard had knocked some other stuff into the way and had to be arranged against the wall again. Being the motherly one out of the group, Jaejoong send his dongsaengs to sleep while he and Yunho cleared up the rubble.
“I agree with Yoochun though.”
“On what?” Yunho asked, setting a CD tower back in its place.
“This place is getting really cramped; maybe we need a new apartment, a house even.”
“I’ll talk to manager-hyung in the morning.”
Jaejoong hummed softly in response as he swept the disturbed dust from the hallway’s floor.
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That's the first chapter, sorry for the lack of excitement -___-. Do you want me to include any pairings? They will not be the main focus though. Tell me what you think!
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Date: 2010-03-06 05:25 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-03-06 06:03 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-03-07 03:24 am (UTC)I'm not sure why, but I lmao @ "A blood-curling shriek was heard in the middle of the night." when I found out it was Min. XD For some reason, I keep imagining the Min scream from Mirotic. kekeke
Of course it would be Changmin getting up in the middle of night to get a midnight snack! lol; he's such a cutie~ I want to pinch (his now non-existent) cheeks. *coos*
*ruffles sleep Chun head*
I know it's supposed to be horror, but imagining sleepy DBSK makes me squeal!!! (>__<) It's like... they're so cuuuuuuuuutttteeee!! AWWWWW. hahaha
Couples? 8D
Yoooooooosssssssuuuuuuu!!! eunkyangkyang! ~ ♥
J/K J/K Maybe you can finally show me some JaeChun love that I've been missing out on. hahaha :Db Nothing one-sided, though! >:D
And I think some hinted HoMin or MinSu or HoSu (or HoMinSu) would be guuuuuud, too. *perverted chuckle*
I FINALLY SEE YOUR WRITING!!! \(*O*)/
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Date: 2010-03-07 06:26 pm (UTC)Oooh Mirotic scream ~sexy~
You won't be squealing at the cuteness no more >:)
I think the JaeChun somewhat fits ;D
I have the beginning of next chapter written already but, blah...like I said, last night was bad.
I cheated, I had this chapter written a while ago, I just added things here and there ^^;Yay for writing!!no subject
Date: 2010-03-07 09:07 pm (UTC)What happened that night??
lol; I should do a Mirotic scream the next time I'm on a roller coaster or if I get scared or something... XD I think it would be funny to see the other person's reaction.
Okay, okay. If it get's scary, I won't be squealing no more. I'll just be doin' the Mirotic scream. *wink*
*imagines myself screaming at the computer*
JaeChun!!!! ♥ Can't wait to see some fanservice. hehehehe
Tell me about your night? :( You sound upset...
(*O*)/ Cheater!!!
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Date: 2010-03-07 09:47 pm (UTC)I had a party that day and I got there late because I was crying so hard. My mom picked me up and said it was also my fault and that I should forgive my dad. I stayed in the car for a while and my dad came to talk to me but I ran out and locked myself in my room crying again.
I still haven't talked to him.
Weee~ I hope it's good enough that you'll Mirotic-scream!!
IDK, if I'll do JaeChun or YunJae. Those are the too that seem to fit the most.
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Date: 2010-03-07 10:14 pm (UTC)I'm really sorry. Fighting with parents are the worst. They never seem to understand what I'm trying to say to them and even if it isn't exactly all our fault, they keep blaming us (just because we're younger). *sigh*
I hope things go for the better~
*sends you lots of love*
*offers hug and a shoulder, too*
I'll be here for you! (online of course, but either way... >__>)
It will be good enough to make me mirotic scream. ;D lol I might even send you an audio clip of it. hahaha
Hm... It's up to you. :)
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Date: 2010-03-07 11:54 pm (UTC)Thanks for the pretty hearts *-*
Aww, thanks. That really means a lot ♥
LMAO, I wanna hear!!
I still don't know what to do u_ú
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Date: 2010-03-18 03:26 am (UTC)...
ill forgive you when i read it xD
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Date: 2010-03-18 03:39 am (UTC)jajajajaja oye escribe la storia magica!!! ¬¬
amo tu writing!! y cuando seas una famosa escritora sere tu fan #1!!! :]
ily dude
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Date: 2010-03-18 04:42 am (UTC)jajaj recuerdame cuando este cuerda.
Y me dirás "OMG SOY TU FANS!" ? XD
te emo, emo.